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.o0OsuperseidO0o. by *LuvWyer:iconLuvWyer:

Categories Fan Art > Cartoons/Comics > Traditional > Miscellaneous

©2009 *LuvWyer
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*godfathersky Jun 30, 2009, 7:28:38 AM
Hi, great line art here! Nice composition but I personally feel that the right thigh seems too small and it looks a bit odd to the overall anatomy. (his right foot is about the same size as his left foot, right thigh should be much bigger) The cape could be larger/longer also, probably expanding out of the frame. I do like the anatomy of his right arm and fist. Colours would be able to bring out the contrast and perhaps to add glow on the eyes of the villain while his face in a dark colour. Anyway its just my opinion, still a nice work :)
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*trialsze Jun 29, 2009, 2:05:02 PM
I think that this is really good. The only thing I would say is to thicking up the lines around Supes. He doesn't pop as much as he could. Especially around the hand area. It would be an easy fix. Plus, it might be something you are planning the colors to fix by poping him out. But for me Darkseid has so much black in him that it seems that he is the focus and not Supes. Are you planning to color this pic? If so are you planning on pushing supes out with them? But that is just my two cents. Still very good.
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awesome as always my friend :D

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Someone's in for a whuppin! Awsome work here

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