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.o0OdynagirlBannerO0o. by LuvWyer .o0OdynagirlBannerO0o. by LuvWyer
Here's the new banner for the DynaGirl web sight [link]
Lines by me
and colors by my good good friend :iconsplashcolors:
here's the inks
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:iconroguesamurai:
My first critique on DA.

I like the overall concept, but would have liked more contrast between the rock and background. There is so much brown and orange in both parts, that it doesn't give me that separation I would enjoy. I also might have liked to see a bit more texture to the ground and rock, which would also give contrast to the smooth skin and outfit of the subject, thusly pointing more at the subject as the focal point.

Lines are clean with pretty good weight, colors are clean and well put together. The cell shading effect works okay for this piece.

Overall, a very nice piece, but there are things that I think could make it stronger than what it is. Stand alone, this piece is strong on both lines and colors, and nobody would blink twice about just accepting it 'as is' with no need for tweaks, but then, good art is never finished. It's abandoned. :) Well done guys.
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erockalipse Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Dope!
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erockalipse Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Dope!
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eternal10 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student General Artist
love the foreshorting
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deviantsith75 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This piece glows with wicked warmth!
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LuvWyer Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Haha!!!! Thanx!
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dragonzero323 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
You guys do good work together. Sexy, sexy pose. great color.
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LuvWyer Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah, He's great at what he does!!
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BernyArrBee Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Professional General Artist
This just looks cool! XD
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RandomReduX Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She looks fantastic!
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LuvWyer Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank U ^_^
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