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.o0ObreakingtheborderO0o. by LuvWyer .o0ObreakingtheborderO0o. by LuvWyer
...this is one of my favorite pages from the second issue...
U can take a look at the page with words and such over at
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I'm not completely happy with the perspective in the first panel but whatever. I've learned from my mistakes and feel as though I've grown because of them =P
Lines: Me
Colors: :iconsafari-sunset:
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Atlas0 Aug 18, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Lots of movement in DynaGirl's panels =P Great job.
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LuvWyer Aug 19, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanx!!!!!
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HamsterRage Aug 18, 2010  Professional General Artist
Pn 1- Light source could really help determine figure ground relationship. A shadow below her will help ground her. There are some perspective issues here that probably need to be reworked structurely... the chairs need to be cheated bigger or smaller so the don't touch the bottom of the counter on the opposite side. The stool doesn't read as a stool.

Pn 2- I like, I don't know what going on with the line in the torso... I don't know what it's defining.

Pn 3-5 I dig em... I get what's happening.

Pn 6- Tangent issues with the fist and foot touching the bottom border... other than that I like the pose alot

Overall, really great stuff.
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LuvWyer Aug 18, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
...indeed,
everything U mentioned are issues I had with the page looking back on it now.
Aside from the thing with the torso U picked out some of what bothers me about this page. There's a lot more...
Can U find it...
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