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.o0ODynasaursRunO0o. by LuvWyer .o0ODynasaursRunO0o. by LuvWyer
So today is a actual beginning of the sequential pages for the new issue of DynaGirl [link]
:iconernestj23: did a kick ass job on the colors!!!!
Here's the line work
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TheInkPages Oct 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
my only critique would be that the colours are too overwhelming and saturated (speaking of all the related pages in your gallery). i would desaturate the background a bit just so the characters shand out and to allow the eyes a bit of a resting place when looking at the pages. it would also help creat depth of field which is missing; everything looks like it's on one level (i.e. lacking background and foreground). this i think is most notable on the dinosaur as you can't really distinguise where the head starts and the body begins, you have to look hard at the linework to figure it out whereas the colouring should make the distinction.

I must say though that the colourist has great technique and style. You guys are doing a good job.
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LuvWyer Oct 18, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
I see what u mean. Thanx for taking the time to give me honest feed back.
I appreciate it ^_^
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TheInkPages Oct 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
welcomed. :D
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:icondragonzero323:
Damn good work..
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the-kid36 Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist
awesome :)
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LuvWyer Oct 4, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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Dylanio21 Sep 28, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
WOW SUCH MOTION!
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LuvWyer Oct 4, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanx. I like movement ^_^
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Dylanio21 Oct 4, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
I can really tell!
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