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Here's the inked version of these pages...
Had hella fun with these...
Here's the pencils
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The lower left quad pops some foreground, mid-ground, and background separation but moving through the rest of the piece it feels a bit busy. I want something to pop that foreground figure without making it flat. Detail seems simpler going back and there are some black areas so that helps. It may just be a nit-picky thing, when I see this in my work it tends to come out alright with the colors and I am just left with the critical sense that it should have worked in B&W too. Aside from that everything else is looking good. I don't have any of my prompts here at work to stare at for perspective but the dino is looking good too. That's my two cents hope it offers some helpful food for thought.